Friday, April 12, 2019
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Hi Clara, I really enjoyed the story and I liked how there were many options to choose from. One thing you could work on, is clarifying who the characters are. For example instead of using a whole variety of words like "he" "it" "them" you could just stick with one so we can tell who and what gender it is, if that makes sense. Another thing you could work on is making sure you edit it so it makes sense and the spelling matches with the text. Other than that, great imagination and creativity :)
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