Literacy Feedback!!!

For literacy this term we did lots of stuff on sea turtles and pollution and this is my feedback outcome!

I got some good feedback and some not so good feedback for my title giving clear information so I changed it from Sea Turtles to Sea Turtles Vs Pollution. For using subheading to break up the text I got 50% good so I changed my subheading to give more information.I defined the topic with good evidence so I worked on that to try and define the topic better and in different way. Most of my information was relevant to the topic but I changed it so it was more about just Sea turtles, oil spills and pollution. I didn’t add any links about them so I made another slide just with links. I did do it all in my own words but it didn’t of seemed like it to some other people so I made it so I thought is sounded more like how I would say it. I did well in the graphics being relevant to the text but I changed some of them s it was more relevant. ½ of the people who reflected on it said that I gave evidence of my own opinion so I made sure that I wrote my opinion really strong. I’m beginning to use emotive writing but with more practice I think I’ll do better. I did great on giving suggestions on what you can do to help.

Thanks For Reading!!!