This is another of my 100 word story and I worked on keeping tense the same. Hope you like!
]I didn’t realise they could fly! Tilting my head back I peered into the sunlight at the large animals. They flew around me, wings outstretched and glistening in the sunlight. I whirled around as a large Pegasus thumped on the ground around us. It steps forwards and I feel it's a warm breath on my hand. Tentatively, I reach up and rub his neck. All around us other Pegasus started landing, causing the ground to shake but I hardly noticed. Suddenly I gasped and pulled my hand back, realization in my mind. This was my horse! My horse could fly!
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