My Amazing Writing!

Last week I wrote a story about a photo that I saw on pobble 365. It was about a girl who went to live with her step-dad and found some wild horses, but this week I wrote another story about a child walking down a tunnel into a forest but she can't escape no matter how hard she tries. This is the story from this week:

The Tunnel

I make my way down the dark, forest tunnel, stumbling blindly towards the faint glow of light. The sides of the tunnel were soft against my hands and coated with green moss that got thicker as the light grew nearer. I was so close to the light I could almost feel the sun on my face. Breaking into a jog I ran out and into the light and my suranding where not what I had thought they would be like. There where bright, tall trees everywhere with leaves growing up the sides and there were three circle hoopes that were just taller than me. “I’m Finally Free!” I yelled and then listened closely, hoping to hear a reply. “Fine then, i'll just come and find you” I snap before sighing and walking out the side of the hopes. Well I tried to but as I put my foot over the path line I got thrown backwards into the other side where I also got thrown back into the other wall which threw me to the other wall. This keeps going for a few minutes before I managed to stop myself and lay on the ground panting. This is going to be a very long day I think to myself before throwing myself at the invisible wall again.