Six Paragraphs
This term we have been doing six paragraphs and this is my work.
Once upon a time there lived a 20 meter tall robot and his name was Kane. He is only seen wearing big, red armour, tops and pants. The robot was 28 years old and his birthday was on the 26th of September.
Kane lives on the dimly lit streets of Helotown, scraping the pavements for food. He got used to the dark, quiet streets and the tall, swaying buildings.
He is a very kind hind robot and is always in the mood to help others. Kane loves helping people and loves to help any one at any time.
His only problem is that he is he is so big, so all the people think he is a utterly terrifying monster! Every time after he helps someone he expects them to say thanks but they just scream and run away.
Sometimes Kane feels like he is rejected and know one likes him for know one ever talks to him. Kane often feels like he doesn't belong here.
One day Kane heard screaming from the queen's palace! When Kane got there he ended up saving the 5 year old Princes cat, Marshmallow. Marshmallow is an adorable white, fluffy cat with a big, blue eyes. Now everyone loves Kane and they always say thanks when he helps them…
By Clara
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