I was a pupil at Rāwhiti School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Thursday, August 9, 2018
The Beach
I felt the sun on my face,my feet sinking into the light,soft sand. The sound of waves crashing in the distance filled my ears as I walked down the beach.As I walked towards the sea my feet felt like they were on fire on the hot sand. Soon I was standing in the water with the waves splashing all the way up to my waist.I step deeper into the water and I felt the cold,blue water washing over me. Even though it was cold I still dove down deep into the icy water. When I came up I could taste the salty water washing round in my mouth. As I walked towards the shore I saw dogs running around madly and chasing seagulls. I felt the sand wiping in my face and making my eyes water.Splash,splash! I looked round and saw a fluffy smelly dog bounding up to me. As it splashed up to me I smelt it’s stinky dog breath. It’s sky blue eyes sparkled as the sun shone into its eyes. I continued to walk up the beach and I only stopped at the top of the sand dunes to look back at the wonderful Brighton beach.
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